THE LAST NIGHT VISIT TO YOUR DEAR FRIEND



Thinking about you, all the way

How you will be?
Will you recognize me?
The childhood memories,
Having lots of queries.

The fights once fought royally,
It never meant so cruelly,
Still I cried upon those silly wound,
And you too fall down on the ground.

Subsequently the scolding we get,
For which we never regret.
And then the quick amity,
By exchanging our toffee.

Hahaha…………..
Laughing all over the place again,
As if same blood running through our vain,
Friends envied form our quick gain.

Remember our favorite place, top of the old rocks!!
Where we exchange our lunch box,
And then running around like fool,
Isn’t it so cool!!

I lean to the window and feel,
Suddenly my fellow passenger appeal,
Your station has arrive,
I look around as I retrieve.

Hastily I stand up,
Recovering from the nick nap.
As I was packing my bag,
I scan the station through the window’s gap.

I found you were no more the same,
It seems life had played too many game.
Still you are cherish,
Even if you are looking quiet blemish.

Holding me tightly in your arms,
Once again you caught me in your old charm.
Overwhelmed with each others presence,
We found our friendship befall more dense.

The night seems too small,
For our gossip, never ending at all.
The sun rise and morning break,
Its time for me to leave for another trek.

I said good bi my dear pal,
Showing myself typical.
But weeping deep inside the heart,
Laughing on our fate apart.

Next day I reached home,
Feeling a bit alone.
Looking around the garden,
I thought about you once again.

As I opened my door,
I found a telegram on the floor.
I get a shock
You died yesterday at 9 O’clock.

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Creator’s talk

Tell me how you felt about the above poem. It consumes a lot of time to get good rhyming words which convey good meanings too. But after all, the hard work has its own blossoms and thrones. Just give your few precious minutes to comment on this subject. Your suggestions will really help me improve.

Thanks and happy reading

Babun

Comments

atul tayade said…
oh my god was the reaction, when I read this a very good work with such simple words. I wish i could do this. touched my heart I reallymean it.
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